In this photograph you can see me with my best friend of the University, Macarena Cortes. This woman has been a very important support to me in this year and a half that I study in Universidad de Chile, because apart form having the same schedule that I have, she lives nearly to my house. That’s why I like this photo so much, because we appeared so happy, that I feel “Maca” is beside me.The person that took this photograph was Andrea Guerrero, another important friend to me in the University that yesterday have a camera to photograph every people that want to take one, like me and Macarena.
This picture of Macarena and I was taken yesterday and the situation happens in the University’s Football Fields, when we was watching a match of our friends of first form and third from, playing the local football cup called “King’s Cup”.
You made a good effort, Diego. Nevertheless, your writing has many mistakes.
ReplyDeleteThis is the criteria I used to evalate you:
-All aspects of the task are very well handled 3
-Some problems with word formation and usage. Occasional lapses in coherence that hinders clarity of message. 1.5
-Grammar is weak with noticeable errors 1
You get 5.5 points. That´s a 4.5 - 1 (for the dalay)= 4.5 - 1 : 3.5
See you in class.
Paula
Please, edit your post with José´s help.
See you in class.
Paula